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	<title>Comments on: Improving An Observational Humor Line</title>
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	<description>Better thinking -- Better speaking --  Better living</description>
	<pubDate>Sun, 12 Oct 2008 20:00:32 +0000</pubDate>
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		<title>By: John Kinde</title>
		<link>http://www.humorpower.com/blog/2008/04/improving-an-observational-humor-line/#comment-68126</link>
		<dc:creator>John Kinde</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 04 May 2008 17:27:16 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Yes.  Doing it visually probably would have worked very nicely and might have been the best choice.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Yes.  Doing it visually probably would have worked very nicely and might have been the best choice.</p>
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		<title>By: AndyD</title>
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		<dc:creator>AndyD</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 04 May 2008 15:36:37 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I'm familiar with the terms "nodding off" and "land of nod" but even so, I didn't make that connection. Maybe it would have been different live.

One other option might be the visual approach of mimicking "nodding off", rather than stating it outright.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I&#8217;m familiar with the terms &#8220;nodding off&#8221; and &#8220;land of nod&#8221; but even so, I didn&#8217;t make that connection. Maybe it would have been different live.</p>
<p>One other option might be the visual approach of mimicking &#8220;nodding off&#8221;, rather than stating it outright.</p>
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