Comments on: When Humor Mis-Fires (Part Two) http://www.humorpower.com/blog/2008/11/when-humor-mis-fires-part-two/ Better thinking -- Better speaking -- Better living Mon, 06 Feb 2012 05:45:43 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=abc hourly 1 By: Michael Maile http://www.humorpower.com/blog/2008/11/when-humor-mis-fires-part-two/comment-page-1/#comment-107032 Michael Maile Tue, 02 Dec 2008 12:29:31 +0000 http://www.humorpower.com/blog/?p=513#comment-107032 Great story, and touching. The "leg-up" remark was not necessary at all; the word "help" said enough. BTW: the word "amazing" appear three times in one paragraph (below the word OUCH), and then another time further down. Ouch. Reminds me of my daily writing. Every time I read over my article, I make changes. Each time! Wish there was an online proof-reading volunteer-group. Maybe there is? Thank you for this encouraging story. jmm Great story, and touching. The “leg-up” remark was not necessary at all; the word “help” said enough.

BTW: the word “amazing” appear three times in one paragraph (below the word OUCH), and then another time further down. Ouch.

Reminds me of my daily writing. Every time I read over my article, I make changes. Each time! Wish there was an online proof-reading volunteer-group. Maybe there is?
Thank you for this encouraging story. jmm

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