Observational Humor — Case Study #47
Here’s another monologue and analysis. It was presented at the end of a Toastmasters meeting.
THE SET-UP (What happened and what was said during the meeting, before the monologue was delivered.)
1. Our club President opened the meeting with a toast.
2. We had two guests who appeared to be about 16 years old.
3. Ryan and David are two members in their early 20s.
4. Our emcee for the evening announced the meeting theme: “Kicking Bad Habits.”
5. A speaker opened a quote starting with: “Einstein once said…”
6. A speaker gave a talk on The Science of Prime Numbers.
7. A speaker gave a speech based on the book Love Languages.
8. In an impromptu speech Barbel mentioned watching the “adult channel” in her bedroom.
THE MONOLOGUE
I’ve been in Toastmasters for 36 years. This is the first time I’ve seen a toast. My life is complete.
(Irony. One would expect that Toastmasters would always be doing toasts. “My life is complete” is a topper.)
It’s great to see our young visitors tonight. I’m especially happy they’re here, because Ryan and David can see what it feels like to be old men.
(This joke is a reversal. Turning young people into old people. Very good laugh.)
When Krista announced the theme of Kicking Bad Habits, I thought she said Kinking Bad Habits. I thought that was strange, because that is the theme for next week.
(A joke based on a sound-alike word. I suspected that I wasn’t the only one who heard “kinking” and I was right. The “next week line” was a topper.)
Einstein once said: “The person who can explain the science of prime numbers is not a nerd. The person who can explain the science of prime numbers is a nerd squared.”
(Joke, topper, topper. The first laugh line was “Einstein once said.” Squaring the nerd fit the theme of the speech and was an alternate way of saying Super-Nerd.)
I’m writing a book on Love Languages.
Flashing
Drooling
And heavy breathing
(A parody of the original book. A huge laugh.)
Which reminds me to announce that after the meeting, there’s a party…at Barbel’s. I’ll be taking notes for my book.
(A perfect closer. The topper is a callback.)

January 1st, 2010 at 12:28 pm
47’s not a funny number. Einstein is a funny name.
So far this comment was a lot funnier, when it was just an idea.
Observational Humor isn’t easy. It’s probably at the end of meetings so the Toastmaster can say: “Sorry John, we’re out of time.” ….. “Again….”
Funny, I’ve never thought of a Toastmaster meeting as “THE SET-UP”
Now My life is complete.
I’m 67 and a half. We have a member in our club that looks 16 to me, and he’s in his late 20s.
I’m in Las Vegas for the next 11 days. Last night, I celebrated New Year’s Eve at the Santa Fa Casino I got a free paper hat. It cost me about $200.
That’s not a funny number either. It said 2010 on it, so maybe it was a bargin.
That wasn’t funny at the Casion either.
Cheers from a Minnesota tourist where we often say: “You can tell a Norwegian, but you can’t tell him much.”
January 1st, 2010 at 2:14 pm
I really enjoyed sharpness of the twists. They got me thinking; I plan to pay closer attention to what goes on at our meetings to see how I can turn them into observational humours. Requires a lot of practice, I would think!
Boy! what a way to think on your feet!
Chinwe
January 1st, 2010 at 3:06 pm
Welcome to Las Vegas, Dick.
Join us at our Toastmasters meeting on Monday!
You can join the Observational Humor.
John